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Sunday 13 July 2014

Holiday Reading - Rewrite the Ending

   
In the end of the story I think that instead of Geronimo tripping over a rock I think he should has felt a sudden rush quickness and pedaled as fast as he could rushed past the team in front of Geronimo’s then won.



The book I read was The Race Across America by Geronimo Stilton. This book is an adventure book.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Kahlista
    I think that you ending is better because it is a happy ending and I love happy endings. Keep up the great work.

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