Original End - They find the werewolf that has taken the pair of false teeth and punished the chef that adopted him because he was the one that came up with the plan.
My Ending - They find the werewolf and instead of still allowing the chef to go, after they punished him at the aquarium i’d make him write a book that tells the story.
The title of the book is Meet The Vimpiresons By Knife and Packer. This book is an adventure book. My ending is better because it kinds of make it like the chef was the person that wrote the book.
Hi Kahlista,
ReplyDeleteVery impressive and well re-written ending! Also, it's very clever of you to include the original ending, so viewers are able to compare both texts. Keep it up!
Yours Sincerely,
Fine
Hello Fine,
DeleteThank you Fine, I sure will kep it up.
Hi Kahlista,
DeleteI like the idea that instead of the chef getting punished, he could write a really good story to what happened. It's clever the way you have include the original end. It sounds like a really interesting book and I hope you could lend it to me next term.
Well done
Keep up the good work
Hello Chloe, Thank you and I be sure to give you the book.
DeleteHi Kahlista
ReplyDeleteyour ending is really good and it gives you a better example of the ending of the story
And your book sounds really interesting
Keep up the good work
Shaylah
Hello Shaylah,
DeleteThank you, my book was really interesting.
Hi Kahlista i really like your original story ending good job Kahlista
ReplyDeleteYours,Faithfully
Tatiana Taufa
Hello Tatiana,
DeleteThe original ending wasn't mine, but thank you.
Hi Kahlista
ReplyDeleteI thought your ending was better and it was funny. I liked the part of when you said 'I'd make him write the book that tells the story. Keep up the great work.
Hello Bella,
DeleteThank You, I did put a lot of thought into my ending.