This is my draw document for the independent activity out teacher set us for this week.
Thursday, 6 November 2014
Wednesday, 22 October 2014
Monday, 20 October 2014
Tuesday, 14 October 2014
Monday, 13 October 2014
My Worst Mistake
My worst mistake was about a year and a half ago. I was sent to the store to get some stuff that we needed for dinner. My mistake was telling a lie and taking advantage of my mum because she always sent me to the store instead of herself.
I was 11 years old and turning 12 in a couple of months. My mother always sent me to the store if we needed anything, and she still does. As always I did as I was told and I bought the stuff my mom asked me to buy. But this time what my mom told me to buy wasn’t the only thing I bought. I also bought me a chocolate bar. I knew that my mum knew how much change she was supposed to get back, so on my walk home I ate my chocolate bar thinking of something to tell my mum. When I handed my mum her change she looked at my confused. I lied to her that some of the food prices went up, she believed me.
It wasn’t long after that I was thinking about what I told her and how she believed me. I started to regret lying to my mum, so I told her. She didn’t seem angry but I knew that she was. I apologised and she forgave me, lying to my mum is something I never want to do again.
Friday, 10 October 2014
Original End - They find the werewolf that has taken the pair of false teeth and punished the chef that adopted him because he was the one that came up with the plan.
My Ending - They find the werewolf and instead of still allowing the chef to go, after they punished him at the aquarium i’d make him write a book that tells the story.
The title of the book is Meet The Vimpiresons By Knife and Packer. This book is an adventure book. My ending is better because it kinds of make it like the chef was the person that wrote the book.